I think the blog looked good and the text color matched the background nice.
I did not find any spelling mistakes and the picture looked good
Nothing looked bad to me in the blog overall.
12 November, 2008
Maceys Response
Paige, I think that its great that you want to learn more about what happened with the Twin Towers. It sounds very interesting. I think it could be kind of hard for you to get new information, because they dont really know exactly what happened and why they decided to attack the Twin Towers. Although I am sure you are going to find variations of information, because there is a lot of talk about what happened to the Twin Towers, but some of it might be false.
Victoria's Post
I think it is good that you are reserching this topic. There are a lot of people out there that don't think about 9/11 to much anymore. To find out direct information you could go to websites that are of newspapers in New York. Try the New York Times. They might have information.
You might want to do spell check again becasue I noticed one or two spelling mistakes. Other then that everything looks good.
You might want to do spell check again becasue I noticed one or two spelling mistakes. Other then that everything looks good.
Laura's Post
I like what topic you picked, but there are a few spelling errors. In 9/11 make sure you have the slash on all of them. Updated is also one word instead of two. It is good that you have a pretty good amount of information and there usually is a lot about it on television. I like the look of your blog it is easy to read. You could try and find someone that was in the twin towers when it happend and get their point of view, and their story on what happend to them.
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